Crimson Daggers — Art forum › TOURNAMENTS › THE CRIMSON CRUCIBLE › CRIMSON CRUCIBLE WIPS v
CC4 Down the Hatch!

Linear Mode
CC4 Down the Hatch!
Arapersonica Offline
Tapered Shimmer
***
Posts: 104
Threads: 7
Joined: Mar 2016
Reputation: 9
#12
06-26-2016, 07:10 AM
Yes!!

I like how the panels fall away at the end... And I do agree with Amit, I'm not really sure where the story is going. But you can use the word balloons to help you lead the reader's eye!

BELIEVE IN THE ME WHO BELIEVES IN YOU! Sun
DeviantArt | YouTube | My Books and Comics

[url=http://arapersonica.deviantart.com/][/url]
Website Find
Reply


Messages In This Thread
CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-19-2016, 11:23 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by JyonnyNovice - 06-19-2016, 11:29 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by Amit Dutta - 06-20-2016, 01:55 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-21-2016, 06:17 AM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-22-2016, 07:36 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-24-2016, 10:03 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by Amit Dutta - 06-24-2016, 10:54 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by JyonnyNovice - 06-25-2016, 04:55 AM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by BadWoolf - 06-25-2016, 06:12 AM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-25-2016, 10:29 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by Amit Dutta - 06-26-2016, 03:07 AM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by Arapersonica - 06-26-2016, 07:10 AM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by JyonnyNovice - 06-26-2016, 01:51 PM
RE: CC4 Down the Hatch! - by John - 06-27-2016, 12:50 AM

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 2 Guest(s)