Caricature commission

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Hey brother, Just trying to help out if i can, made a few quick changes in the direction i would go.
just trying to alter the values so the characters stand out a bit more, made the guy look at the customer so he looks like that muscle kinda scary guy trope, the girl looks boss as already. changed the feet positions a bit to what felt better to me. added his reflection on the snipers for added comedic value. hope there is something helpful here.
good luck, caricature is hard!