Progress, critique is always welcomed!
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Heeeeyyy I found your SB!!

Nice stuff in here, lots of studies! Hmm, we need more imaginative stuff for sure!

A little critique I noticed here; But these are very very little things

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...rstudy.jpg

Look at the arm you drew that's coming out, the way the deltoid lines up with the pectoralis, it's like cut off, like it dips in whereas the original its rounded out. In the original he's got a leeeetle bit more stomach and theres a very subtle tilt in the way his stomach is that's important but hard to nail ina gesture. Also his thighs and calves in particular are a tad longer. Pay a little attention also to the way his nose in yours is slanting into the cavity of the eye socket, it's very subtle.

Oh and ur so young but so good OMG XX <3

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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RE: Progress, critique is always welcomed! - by Fedodika - 08-03-2017, 04:37 AM

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