Beau's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

hmm lots of scribblies! who doesnt love scribblies :) I'm not sure how to critique the perspective stuff, but the (goku?) guy, id take that lasso, rectangle his bicep and make it longer, and also fix his hand behind with reference. Idk if its a great pose, or value arrangement, it seems like an exercise really. Im not sure what the narrative or action is, hes just a naked guy seemingly walking, i remember in an old critter dave rapoza stream he said something along the lines of,

"This, dude is just like a guy in the woods screamin like, whats the point, wheres he going?"

So, something to consider, creative illustration by loomis addresses a lot of composition stuff and narrative to consider, also study the works of dean cornwell or other golden age illustrators to see how they did story and conceptual stuff. Maybe your picture is more a simple concept, theres ways to present that well, like leyendecker... Also consider the values, i mean they seperate but they are all so samey, try to make the background say much darker, or the figure much darker, seperate elements clearly with value ;)