BeetleSpider's Web
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I think in the future it could be important to add the mention w.i.p (work in progress to certain of your post)
.Because i cannot give an opinion on something if i don't consider the stage of progress it at.For example i cannot give advise posible direction to a piece if the piece is already done.If it a finish piece i got a lot more freedom to critic what is presented but if it a work in progress a certain restrain should be use since alot of the work is still missing the work can also be sloppy just to be more expressive or to put idea on the paper as to brainstorm rapidly about the composition of the element in the scene.So yeah it important to let other know the stage your at in your drawing.

Right now the leak of background lead me to think you do not know enough about perspective so you decide to use blank dark back ground.If i was you i would take neopatogen advise and go to https://drawabox.com/lessons in the long run it will help your figure more 3d since you will be able to anchor down you figure to the ground .

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BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 03-20-2020, 05:20 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by darktiste - 03-20-2020, 05:58 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by neopatogen - 03-20-2020, 07:43 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 03-20-2020, 09:31 PM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by darktiste - 03-21-2020, 02:27 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by Artloader - 03-22-2020, 04:49 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 03-24-2020, 03:52 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by chubby_cat - 03-24-2020, 02:57 PM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 03-31-2020, 03:24 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 04-07-2020, 05:19 AM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by BeetleSpider - 04-08-2020, 08:51 PM
RE: BeetleSpider's Web - by neopatogen - 04-19-2020, 01:32 AM

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