Mochiman's sketchbook

[darktiste]

Redrawing is an option but my prefered way of going about something is probably finding more reference if possible to complement my leak of understand of the form. and study from an other angle.It one thing to be inaccurate with how you lay your stroke it an other thing not to understand the form of something.But of course if you have trouble with representing something from a certain angle it pay off to redraw completely or to simply restate the line meaning you don't erase line but you rather put multiple line until you reach the result your looking for it messier but it a faster way of doing instead of redrawing something fully which seem like it can be interpreted as a waste of time because the issue is not in the rest but in a specific line not following perspective correctly or not being accurate enough.

On an other note i think one of the thing that strike me is how your design don't breath there not much understand of the concept of busy vs area of rest there also maybe some issue with scale and readability because there just to much detail but it so small that it doesn't read.If you want to draw something that is small in general you make sure there space for the element inside your object or character to read properly.Design who read from afar are in my opinion better than design who don't strong silhouette help the viewer understand what going on much easier.

Also note how small the information i provided you with is you think someone like to read that at that scale?This just goes to show how scale is something important in design.