Fickle's Thread

[darktiste]

I find the scene to charged but there not necessarly something interesting in there either.Idk what was the goal of this piece but it not clear to me. I would probably put that white tower in the distance instead to create a more balance compositon atm i feel like the only interesting stuff seem to be on the right there an interesting rythme in the piece but it not that clear also.

What i feel looking at your scene is impression of being small and lost.I think my main issue is with ''the tower'' it in the 4 corner of interest meaning it at the right spot but the problem is that it not balance i think when you have 2 object on the same side of the image it create something unbalanced.


I tried to show you want i meant.I also change the scale a bit on the character to give it more visual weight.

Sorry for the rough PO job