01-29-2021, 02:31 AM
Alright, here it is, two hours later with some comments:
@gerbenpesjes:
I like your edit! I was thinking of doing fire hydrants later on :). I'll also probably steal the concept for the fence, haha.
@darktiste:
What I gather from your post is that assets should be posted as a whole as opposed to individual pieces. I agree and will try to put a coherent whole by the end of this thread when I have an hopefully nice scenery going on.
Comments follows the image:
![[Image: Vnvf4V8.png]](https://i.imgur.com/Vnvf4V8.png)
3: Very simple, perhaps too simple. Perspective is a bit off too.
4: An improvement over 3, trying to simplify the leaves as mentioned before but not happy with the result.
5: Working on texture again, hit and miss at various spots.
6: Like #3, simple, could potentially work.
7: Perspective is off and colors are the bottom wrong and fix the top.
8: Tried to correct that the texturing t the bottom.
9: At a glance, same as #8, my bad!
10: Tried to fix the perspective of 7-8-9 but the color o top too saturated.
11. Tried a new approach again with simpler leaves as recommended.
12. I like the perspective but the texture is wrong.
That's my own self-criticism. I'll keep at it if you guys could point suggestions or edit.
Thank you!
@gerbenpesjes:
I like your edit! I was thinking of doing fire hydrants later on :). I'll also probably steal the concept for the fence, haha.
@darktiste:
What I gather from your post is that assets should be posted as a whole as opposed to individual pieces. I agree and will try to put a coherent whole by the end of this thread when I have an hopefully nice scenery going on.
Comments follows the image:
3: Very simple, perhaps too simple. Perspective is a bit off too.
4: An improvement over 3, trying to simplify the leaves as mentioned before but not happy with the result.
5: Working on texture again, hit and miss at various spots.
6: Like #3, simple, could potentially work.
7: Perspective is off and colors are the bottom wrong and fix the top.
8: Tried to correct that the texturing t the bottom.
9: At a glance, same as #8, my bad!
10: Tried to fix the perspective of 7-8-9 but the color o top too saturated.
11. Tried a new approach again with simpler leaves as recommended.
12. I like the perspective but the texture is wrong.
That's my own self-criticism. I'll keep at it if you guys could point suggestions or edit.
Thank you!