01-24-2022, 07:28 PM
There not and strong enough difference between the water reflectivity and the wet surface of the creature.
Also back lit object still receieve that back light so you wouldn't be getting those tree like silhouette on the right like this unless it was like a cast shadow they would recieve less light but swamp tree density isn't enough that it would appear as 1 value since there not enough overlapping object to block the light source.
There also a weird thing happening with the water it curving as if there a wave forming from something else than the creature.It should feel flat and pretty calm with a few ripple.I suggest turning most of the water into a mud.
Frog eye aren't sitting on the top of there head but a little bit on the side.A rule of thumb to determine where the eye of a creature is.Would be to know what they eat.Most predator have foward looking eye will prey generally have eye on the side of there head.
As for the frog i am not sure if the character is aware or unaware but if he unware it kinda strange because alot of the frog skin is still showing which make it strange that he wouldn't recognize the floor of the swamp compare to the wet skin of a frog.You might want to throw more algue or vegetation on top of it but not so much that we lose the frog but just enough that it to to obvious either.
Also back lit object still receieve that back light so you wouldn't be getting those tree like silhouette on the right like this unless it was like a cast shadow they would recieve less light but swamp tree density isn't enough that it would appear as 1 value since there not enough overlapping object to block the light source.
There also a weird thing happening with the water it curving as if there a wave forming from something else than the creature.It should feel flat and pretty calm with a few ripple.I suggest turning most of the water into a mud.
Frog eye aren't sitting on the top of there head but a little bit on the side.A rule of thumb to determine where the eye of a creature is.Would be to know what they eat.Most predator have foward looking eye will prey generally have eye on the side of there head.
As for the frog i am not sure if the character is aware or unaware but if he unware it kinda strange because alot of the frog skin is still showing which make it strange that he wouldn't recognize the floor of the swamp compare to the wet skin of a frog.You might want to throw more algue or vegetation on top of it but not so much that we lose the frog but just enough that it to to obvious either.