Please help me finalize this illustration.

[Leysan]

Thanks you two for your thoughtful comments. I will have to reread and let them think in.  Thats actually what I missed to push me to the next step after years of stagnation.

Anyway, what I picked up from your comments, is that my composition is not telling the story I want and is not engaging. So is this any better? I want the naga to appear in a dominant position occupiying most of the image. The paladin humble after understanding his mistake.

Should I try more thumbnails before trying to flesh out this one?