01-15-2014, 02:31 AM
Thanks for the comment dude! Love the way you're handling those soft edges, there's something really subtle and sophisticated going on.
I think you should be a bit more careful with your value structure though, it's bugging me in your last portrait how the planes on the top of the girl's nose that ought to be in light are just as dark as the bottom planes. It does make the highlight on the nose pop out nicely, but that's not as important as having the forms lit right. I'd probably try getting some light on the lower eyelids too.
Keep rocking dude!!!
I think you should be a bit more careful with your value structure though, it's bugging me in your last portrait how the planes on the top of the girl's nose that ought to be in light are just as dark as the bottom planes. It does make the highlight on the nose pop out nicely, but that's not as important as having the forms lit right. I'd probably try getting some light on the lower eyelids too.
Keep rocking dude!!!