Anatomy of a Pinup - Class Closed

[eizOga]

Ok so first off:

Shyam, truly sorry, I didn't realise that your last post ment we should have messaged you in advance that we'd be at class this morning/night. Razvan and I hung out for a bit and talked about our pieces.

Second: I have had a HARD time getting this piece where I want it. That said, did some quick thumbnails this morning, got extra reference for the face, and here's where I'm at -

1. Changed lighting, little more from right side then just behind - as originaly intended.
2. Focused on some rendering, while re-working design elements as per some of your paint over suggestions - making the suit design a little more pleasing/feminin
3. Re-worked the face to a point where I think at least she can be considered beatifull, attempted to have at least a little concern on her face for her expression (You could say she's a cross between Adell & Megan Fox based on my reference)
4. Went back to some of my original sketches as I thought my work was loosing what I liked/had captured in my initial ideation - so provided two versions of the work as it stands (the second having the pose adjusted)
5. Also provided the slight variations in the face that lead up to the current version - just in case people think I coul dgo in a different direction for the face

So am at the computer the rest of today, and likely all day tomorrow - big push on this and on trying to complete at least one entry for Spectrum submissions ... we'll see :P

I'll post more updates as I make significat changes. I'm likely to do some rough colour thumbs tomorrow, I'd rather not render out to much, leaving me room to add rendering while in colour.

Aight back to it! - comment & crits away!