02-01-2013, 07:43 PM
Naevea - thanks for posting all those works, just one suggestion/critique..maybe you could spend more time on each of the assignment.
good to see your updates Matt,
few things about your pinup
-try to add more rhythm in her hair, figure and those smoke thingy
-use some ref. for her face, as well as the whole figure she looks a bit manly, will discuss
about the expressions later
-i know its just a wip but still, try to minimize those smoke patches.
-try to improvise her dress, that thong (not sure if thats the correct term) looks too modern..how about using some metal or
organic material instead? just a suggestion.
good to see your updates Matt,
few things about your pinup
-try to add more rhythm in her hair, figure and those smoke thingy
-use some ref. for her face, as well as the whole figure she looks a bit manly, will discuss
about the expressions later
-i know its just a wip but still, try to minimize those smoke patches.
-try to improvise her dress, that thong (not sure if thats the correct term) looks too modern..how about using some metal or
organic material instead? just a suggestion.