03-26-2013, 08:47 AM
the composition is much better now.
But your problem now is that your characters look too stiff, lifeless maybe.
Your last W40K pieces for example, all they looked like you used real warhammer miniatures to do the illustration. And i think that happens because you focus to much on rendering in detriment of other things like movement, mood, etc.
Studying from life will eliminate that problem though. :)
Keep pushing man, you are off to make a huge step forward!
But your problem now is that your characters look too stiff, lifeless maybe.
Your last W40K pieces for example, all they looked like you used real warhammer miniatures to do the illustration. And i think that happens because you focus to much on rendering in detriment of other things like movement, mood, etc.
Studying from life will eliminate that problem though. :)
Keep pushing man, you are off to make a huge step forward!
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