12-08-2012, 09:18 AM
Malan- this is looking a lot stronger. the hands are much less of a problem now. one crit is to maybe make the fireball less fat and to raise it higher. at least to meeting her eye level. she is slender and slinky and curvacious, so i feel the fire should echo that. it can be fatter at the top, sure, but lets keep it within reason so its a secondary element and not wider than her torso. lookin good tho!