Portfolio Class- Character Development!

[PTimm]

lots of frustration on this one, but got some solid crits from some friends about the anatomy lighting and background, so hopefully I've addressed those since the last pass, im gonna stop on it for now and wait to see what Dan says, if need be like all my other work I'll start from scratch again, unless there is anything I can fix pretty easy. Lovin all the updates tho, nice work on the sketches Malan! i definitely like the bottom right ones the best, and Jmob good work so far, only thing I can see is that she seems kind of stretched IMO like her legs might be too long for the body, kinda what I saw in the mordred sketch, also if you are thinking of putting that cool colored shoulder pad in you may want to move those colors around the design so that it doesnt stick out from her, right now that is the first thing my eye goes to, and I dont think that is your intention, other than that looks good to me.