01-18-2013, 12:18 PM
Hey Jake, its a cool idea and could have a really great mood, but perhaps rethink the stance you have going on, the hunched over look has great potential but his shoulders have come up a bit to far towards his neck so it looks like hes hunched AND bringing his shoulders up himself, just give him some weight, i did a very quick sketch of what i mean about the shoulders, just a bit more flow and less rigid. I think it will help a bit.