09-05-2016, 10:02 PM
Love that girl value study, good quality there.
The running girl piece looks solid, the midground, the colours, the composition and the pose work well.
I would just encourage you to tweak a few things; if you can and it´s your intention to make her a bit more feminine, make the shoulder-neck distance slightly narrower, add a subtle shadow to her left leg.
I like her final face but it lost some of the strenght the sketch had, a powerfull face. Don´t know if it was on purpose or not, it´s just a personal taste haha.
Keep the good work Lale!
The running girl piece looks solid, the midground, the colours, the composition and the pose work well.
I would just encourage you to tweak a few things; if you can and it´s your intention to make her a bit more feminine, make the shoulder-neck distance slightly narrower, add a subtle shadow to her left leg.
I like her final face but it lost some of the strenght the sketch had, a powerfull face. Don´t know if it was on purpose or not, it´s just a personal taste haha.
Keep the good work Lale!