11-08-2012, 07:28 AM
Hey Jaik.
At first glance I can see three things that are bothering me. First, the shadows. I can see that your light is coming from the upper left corner but I can't see any shadows on the model itself. It's like light sources are all over the place but shadow on the floor indicates that the light source is upper left. Also, shadow from the model is totally off. I can just see big grey stain beneath the model.
Next, I see this mech is for military purposes. But then why is driver totally unprotected? And lastly, perspective of left leg is off. See around the second joint.
That's it. Hope this helps. Cheers.
At first glance I can see three things that are bothering me. First, the shadows. I can see that your light is coming from the upper left corner but I can't see any shadows on the model itself. It's like light sources are all over the place but shadow on the floor indicates that the light source is upper left. Also, shadow from the model is totally off. I can just see big grey stain beneath the model.
Next, I see this mech is for military purposes. But then why is driver totally unprotected? And lastly, perspective of left leg is off. See around the second joint.
That's it. Hope this helps. Cheers.