12-09-2019, 02:01 AM
see what happened there? you tweaked it and you saw how it could be better right? thats how improvement works :)
So, we look at this leg on the right, still too stubby, same with the left. The deltoid is a little better, a little more structure, still doesnt have the volume of the original the back of the torso has more width, the right arm has less width around the tricep area. Does his elbow really look like that? if you overlayed it, is that the same shape? I can see how you think the shapes are right, thats understandable, just gotta look deeper into these my dude, the point of these is to train accuracy, and be extremely anal about how close the shapes are to the original, keep tweaking on this, try to get it to where you can overlay it and nail it 99% instead of about 70% accurate where it is right now
So, we look at this leg on the right, still too stubby, same with the left. The deltoid is a little better, a little more structure, still doesnt have the volume of the original the back of the torso has more width, the right arm has less width around the tricep area. Does his elbow really look like that? if you overlayed it, is that the same shape? I can see how you think the shapes are right, thats understandable, just gotta look deeper into these my dude, the point of these is to train accuracy, and be extremely anal about how close the shapes are to the original, keep tweaking on this, try to get it to where you can overlay it and nail it 99% instead of about 70% accurate where it is right now
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]