01-02-2013, 07:37 PM
your coloring is pretty awesome and your focal point are good too. the only thing that I noticed immediately is the anatomy.for instance the anatomical make up of the arm closest to the viewer is incorrect. since it is a major focal point aka receiving lots of light and closest to the viewer its best to make sure its close to perfect as possible.think about the triceps and especially the deltoids. Also tho the torso is covered the way the abdominal area seems to be kind of off as well. hope that helps. Its shaping up to be an awesome image