Jordy's Sketchbook with Art Stuff

[JakeB]

Good stuff dude, those orc sketches look great. That character looks sweet as well, I really like all the little things you've considered. The dirty trousers, the tied material on his shin etc. One thing though, the way you have him holding the gun doesn't look quite right. It seems to have a shotgun stock at the back, but he's holding it like a pistol.

I might be totally wrong on this, and tbh, it's kind of nitpicky, but I think his hand should be gripping the narrow part (just above his hand atm) and the forearm should be in front of the gun.

Sorta like this? http://us.123rf.com/400wm/400/400/alanpo...hotgun.jpg

Like I said, kinda nitpicky, but figured I'd mention it. Keep up the good work man :).

Oh, and btw, that dude in the check suit on the last page. LOVE IT. Awesome character

EDIT: Just looked again, and there could easily be another piece of handle for his hand to be there, think you could maybe tuck the gun behind his arm still though. This hasn't been a very successful crit haha, my bad.