is this composition good?

[beetlejuice]

I think wolken nailed it on the head. I actually rotated your view a bit so you can see how the pose is not really aligned to the background- hope it helps :)

hey man, thanks for that! i fixed up the issue with the rotation of him now :P as well as some issues with his arms. i re positioned them slightly so that now they don't look weird. hopefully the muscle anatomy is correct, but ill let you guys decide that! im off to bed, i shall continue this tomorrow!