03-09-2013, 01:34 PM
Did a quick little redline pointing out some things.
1) I always talk about tangents. As far as image composition goes, there shouldn't be anything directly 'resting upon' the border of the image. I'd say either have the fire effect going completely off the border, or tucked within. Would probably look better tucked in. ;)
2) Mario looks like he's falling off of Dino Yoshi there. He's leaning very much to the left like he's holding on for dear life with his legs. He would have to be shifted over to the right entirely for it to work. Good tilt on the shoulders -> hips though, overall.
3) The length of his right arm that is outstretched is stumpy. This is because the proportions of everything else is off. The fingers swing to the right part of the upper leg but it's just not long enough. Also his rib cage needs to be fleshed out more he's missing some organs on his left side ;).
1) I always talk about tangents. As far as image composition goes, there shouldn't be anything directly 'resting upon' the border of the image. I'd say either have the fire effect going completely off the border, or tucked within. Would probably look better tucked in. ;)
2) Mario looks like he's falling off of Dino Yoshi there. He's leaning very much to the left like he's holding on for dear life with his legs. He would have to be shifted over to the right entirely for it to work. Good tilt on the shoulders -> hips though, overall.
3) The length of his right arm that is outstretched is stumpy. This is because the proportions of everything else is off. The fingers swing to the right part of the upper leg but it's just not long enough. Also his rib cage needs to be fleshed out more he's missing some organs on his left side ;).