Parax Orthean
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It's a really nice comp and the value scheme is good though the blocks could to with more variation to give move them around in the space more. The perspective of the mid ground and river doesn't seem to match the rest of the image and it's hard to tell what scale it is. Guess there should be some light accenting the figures and the foreground grass with that light source. Besides adding more detail and refining your shapes not sure there's much else to say

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Parax Orthean - by TylerDonnelly - 03-15-2013, 12:19 PM
RE: Parax Orthean - by manlybrian - 03-15-2013, 04:06 PM
RE: Parax Orthean - by Amit Dutta - 03-15-2013, 05:42 PM
RE: Parax Orthean - by TylerDonnelly - 03-15-2013, 11:50 PM
RE: Parax Orthean - by Amit Dutta - 03-16-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Parax Orthean - by Ignatz - 03-16-2013, 10:05 AM
RE: Parax Orthean - by Mike086 - 03-17-2013, 12:41 PM

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