07-29-2013, 09:52 PM
(06-01-2013, 03:32 AM)Tygerson Wrote: Love the robot design and the crazy tilted angle on the time warriors.
Hey Tygerson thanks I'm glad you like it.
(06-05-2013, 03:29 AM)Madzia Wrote: I love that you are telling some story in all your pictures. Mysterious, unexpected they keep in suspense. Good job! they are pretty creative but in my humble opinion you could take better care of perspective because they sometimes looks like cut from different pictures and paste in one.
Check you pictures in gray scale often, in fact value in much more important than colors. Values makes object readable. What's in front of the picture what's in background depends on value and contrast. For example the river and forest below characters have really strong value contrast but robot girl is really bright. It should be inverted because object closer to viewer are more contrast than farther one. Also I think Your pictures suffer from emptiness. The important objects in scene would benefit if they where bigger, taking more space of the picture. Otherwise you end with a lot empty spots with not interesting grass fields etc.
Be brave! :) You set your bar high so don't give up :D
Hey Madzia. Thanks for all the critiques. Yeah I know I had some troubles with this piece. I actually opened a thread about it to get some pointers. If you're interested what others said you can check it out here http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-2910.html Anyways thanks for all the help. Will use all the tips on the next piece I'll make :) And also thanks for the support and kind words it's gonna be a long journey.
Here's one of my latest pieces. It was a quick environment piece I did in a few hours.
