You look like in need of critiques =D
Starting with the back muscles man, he needs a bit more pink and watch out for the yellow on the shoulder muscles, it's getting to be a bit brighter than the ref. Harden up on the edges around the the contour of the figure and pull the waist's contour down. What i mean by that is that the waist right now looks like it's fanning out to the edges of the shorts rather than the short edges wrap around the contour of the waist. Overall, your lighting is spot on and the anatomy is great.
The lineart guy is good, the grey under drawing is distracting imo. The dwarf could use another hour if you wanted to give this piece a chance in your portfolio. The characters you do seem to have a rough edge or a tough guy feel to be more specific which leads to some interesting stories. The composition is a bit awkward with the sun right near his head and although the feet are faded into the darker values, you could give them some structure, right now it looks like his legs stop at the shins because of the light colored bandages on them.
Does this help? ^^;; Just ask me where to clarify if I was confusing.
Starting with the back muscles man, he needs a bit more pink and watch out for the yellow on the shoulder muscles, it's getting to be a bit brighter than the ref. Harden up on the edges around the the contour of the figure and pull the waist's contour down. What i mean by that is that the waist right now looks like it's fanning out to the edges of the shorts rather than the short edges wrap around the contour of the waist. Overall, your lighting is spot on and the anatomy is great.
The lineart guy is good, the grey under drawing is distracting imo. The dwarf could use another hour if you wanted to give this piece a chance in your portfolio. The characters you do seem to have a rough edge or a tough guy feel to be more specific which leads to some interesting stories. The composition is a bit awkward with the sun right near his head and although the feet are faded into the darker values, you could give them some structure, right now it looks like his legs stop at the shins because of the light colored bandages on them.
Does this help? ^^;; Just ask me where to clarify if I was confusing.