06-18-2013, 10:29 AM
there are tangents all over the place, in both versions. (look around the wings and the swords)
Also, when you have so many elements getting out of the picture, you need a focal point, to keep the attention of the viewer. In this case, this demon guy looks like he is staring at something outside the canvas, making it look like a cropped picture.
Just making him look towards the viewer would make the picture improve, imo.
Also, when you have so many elements getting out of the picture, you need a focal point, to keep the attention of the viewer. In this case, this demon guy looks like he is staring at something outside the canvas, making it look like a cropped picture.
Just making him look towards the viewer would make the picture improve, imo.
"Stand tall, and shake the Heavens!"
Tumblr for my comic!: http://rainfallcomic.tumblr.com/
Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-1227.html
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/eduardogarayart
Deviantart: http://eduardogaray.deviantart.com/
Tumblr for my comic!: http://rainfallcomic.tumblr.com/
Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-1227.html
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/eduardogarayart
Deviantart: http://eduardogaray.deviantart.com/