04-24-2014, 11:57 PM
Aaaaahh, you got some really sweet works in this sketchbook! Love the style and proportions you have on your characters (that sprite animation was crazy awesome)
Alright! CRIT TIME (hope it's cool) - particularly your portrait/head drawings . You have a really good hand on stylized proportions (that b/w sci-fi chick drawing you did was great!) but you seem to struggle with more "realistic" faces a little.
I'm not sure if the heads you posted recently were studies or imagination stuff, but there is definitely room for improvement especially in the proportions of the facial features. I noticed you have a tendency to draw the nose really long (vertically) and the eyes really high up. Also, for doing 3 quarter heads, I can recommend studying the angles of the "outer" side of the head (the side that has the ear hidden) as well.
Anyways, great stuff all around! Congrats in releasing your game - regardless of how it goes I think it's still pretty awesome to accomplish something like that!
Alright! CRIT TIME (hope it's cool) - particularly your portrait/head drawings . You have a really good hand on stylized proportions (that b/w sci-fi chick drawing you did was great!) but you seem to struggle with more "realistic" faces a little.
I'm not sure if the heads you posted recently were studies or imagination stuff, but there is definitely room for improvement especially in the proportions of the facial features. I noticed you have a tendency to draw the nose really long (vertically) and the eyes really high up. Also, for doing 3 quarter heads, I can recommend studying the angles of the "outer" side of the head (the side that has the ear hidden) as well.
Anyways, great stuff all around! Congrats in releasing your game - regardless of how it goes I think it's still pretty awesome to accomplish something like that!