Wardy's New Sketchbook :)

[kittenile]

update

I really love the mood/serenity you've got going in this image.

I'm not quite at the same level but I think I might be able to give a critique. The main issue in the image is that the spine is too arched and out of balance, straightening it some would add stability and elegance.

There's also some issues with the lighting on the uplifted arm and its shoulder.

I straightened her out with liquify and somewhat traced the position of the spine and lines of action in the former image for comparison. Also, I didn't highlight it but notice how the liquified image now has a more solid arc/line of action that goes from the shoulder to the hip and back.