Wardy's New Sketchbook :)

[Amit Dutta]

Not going to offer a lot of crit, but will add some ref for you to look at. The near torch is nice but probably too strong. If you want to make the focal point on the castle stronger, do that, and perhaps dim down the bright spot at the gate a little. Maybe you could also try and hit more of the castle on that side with some spill light, so it isn't just one isolated spot. I feel you could do more with the volumes of the castle, especially on the right hand side. They are very flat. Make it seem more like a 3D object. The composition isn't quite hitting the mark right now but with some good value work on the castle it should come right. I feel you need to add some more layers between foreground and midground just to help add to sense of scale and depth. And now some Jaime Jones