seeking crit !
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I suggest twisting her torso to her left a bit. If she is indeed riding the creature into the foreground then a nice slight twist would add dynamism to the pose/arching of the back. Also, as in nature any animal will react faster than a human/humanoid to some sort of outside "threat"...the fact that the tiger creature is just ho humming forward makes it very stiff and non-living. I would add a left paw/claw thing and raise it while the creature looks on at the light source (see some of Frazettas work with tigers, lions and bears oh my ) ;)

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seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-02-2013, 07:56 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-02-2013, 03:00 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-02-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by ChantalFournier - 07-03-2013, 05:35 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-03-2013, 08:49 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 10:02 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Ron - 07-03-2013, 11:37 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 11:50 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by gumby - 07-03-2013, 01:33 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by MissLillyArt - 07-05-2013, 10:17 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by ChantalFournier - 07-10-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Tetsuo - 07-11-2013, 03:18 AM
RE: seeking crit ! - by Patrick Gaumond - 07-12-2013, 04:16 AM

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