07-27-2013, 07:14 AM
You second cover, the blue one, needs to have those cards featured more prominently or removed entirely.
You can use the petals of the rose to cascade and lead the viewer's eyes, then echo the petals' shapes with the playing cards and have them coming in close to the viewer.
The girls posture is off, at that angle her eyes wouldn't be visible. Pose in front of a camera or look up some people posed like that, or get a girl to pose that way for you. Get her to turn her head towards the camera and face away.
http://www.highdefdiscnews.com/screensho...uty_11.png
look at that still from american beauty for petal reference/ideas.
You can use the petals of the rose to cascade and lead the viewer's eyes, then echo the petals' shapes with the playing cards and have them coming in close to the viewer.
The girls posture is off, at that angle her eyes wouldn't be visible. Pose in front of a camera or look up some people posed like that, or get a girl to pose that way for you. Get her to turn her head towards the camera and face away.
http://www.highdefdiscnews.com/screensho...uty_11.png
look at that still from american beauty for petal reference/ideas.
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