Portrait critique

[Tygerson]

Some more work. I tried color, and it just isn't working out at all. Not even worth posting. I'll try again tomorrow, but if anyone knows a good place to go for learning to color dramatically lit portraits, please let me know! I have never ever been able to make skin and hair look good in color.

I'm still keeping both dark and light versions going. I think I like the dark for the whole image, but the light for a crop of the face.