Desert Landscape Critique!
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Thanks for all your help! I'll remember that about night scenes from now on, it was pretty hard to find reference. Anyways, here's my repaint. I took a lot of the things you said into account, slightly changed the perspective, made the vocal point stand out more, added some complementary colours to the shadows, etc. Also I added the foreground cactus to make the left side seem less empty.

I took Mikes comment into account as well. He couldn't get a real idea of what the point was, so I tried to give it more story. So I added some type of magic circle around the campsite and a staff which powers it to protect the mage while he sleeps.

Feel free to let me know if anything still needs fixing ^^


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Desert Landscape Critique! - by Wraeclast - 08-19-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Mike086 - 08-19-2013, 02:48 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Amit Dutta - 08-19-2013, 02:50 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Wraeclast - 08-19-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Amit Dutta - 08-19-2013, 05:23 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Wraeclast - 08-19-2013, 05:45 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Amit Dutta - 08-20-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Desert Landscape Critique! - by Wraeclast - 08-20-2013, 07:55 PM

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