09-21-2013, 10:38 PM
Hey Ethan, great work on rendering and the candid shot. I think the comp works nicely but you could drive it a bit more with some lighting. While the realistic desaturated rendering is nice you could draw focus more with some more dynamic lighting and bring in a bit more colour variation to add vibrancy to the palette. I felt like some kind of embellishment around his neck / face area would help as it is a focal point and started to really pop his eyes out a bit more and give them a more focused gaze. The eyes are what we go to first, so make them count. Added some dust particles and atmo as well.Hope it's useful
