12-14-2013, 01:57 PM
(12-14-2013, 10:48 AM)Mike086 Wrote:(12-14-2013, 09:12 AM)darktiste Wrote:(12-13-2013, 03:00 PM)Mike086 Wrote: Your anatomy is broken, the head is too small. Your blue sky would affect his clothing, he has a copy and pasted look because of that.
Meat is correct about your outline, it needs one or none, right now it looks unfinished.
Is the big white circle a light source? If so the lighting it not matching it, put an action figure on a table and shine a flashlight towards it and into your eyes, it would cause a heavy shadow and obscure the figure.
Another issue is that you are dipping into your dark values too much. Do a study with a figure and a flashlight.
Hello just want to share my opinion about your comment i think you sound to ''me'' a bit to aggressive like he as no choose but to follow your instruction i would recommend you to say you can instead of do a study because to ''me''it was to imperative .It would sound better in my opinion.Also saying that is anatomy is broken was for ''me'' not acceptable
Sorry! My tone is way off in text format.
We can be harsh in a polite way and a contructive way.I was under the impression that you choose world that didnt give him the choose to but to follow your instruction.
That was is first time being critized maybe he did take it well but we need to be careful we dont want to scare away people who may seek help.
Sorry that was my point.