work in progress-opinions and critique welcome
#3
I have a few suggestions.

First, I don't think that red on his cloak would be so eh... red. It sort of seems like an overcast day and I think the colors would get a little washed out from that.

Second, I would find a way to bring some of that red on his cloak somewhere else... a red glow in the doorway might be nice. I think that would help connect the elements better.

Third, this dude looks ill prepared for a journey in the snow. :P

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RE: work in progress-opinions and critique welcome - by Jonas Jerde - 01-22-2014, 04:57 PM

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