02-01-2014, 08:15 AM
Ditto about white colour suit vs skin tones as well as cooler colours in shadow areas. Not 100% on the perspective of feet in relation to body, or what that thing she is standing on is. The saturation is very high overall, which is a style / mood thing, but I think you could introduce some lower sat areas to contrast nicely and really drive focus and interest into areas of the figure that need it. I feel some more designed shadow work on the figure overall could help settle it in the 3D space a bit better. Especially internal shadowing, not just the cast shadow of the figure. I also feel the way the gloves and boots have been painted in value and hue range are more limited and make them pop out a bit from the rest of the figure rather than integrate with it.