I see nothing wrong with my anatomy

[pandaladie]

Here is a redline (more like blueline) of your drawings anatomy. I write most of it in there but basicly what you need to do to improve is to look at real people and how their parts and bits relate to eachother.

how big is the mouth compared to the rest of the face? where on the face should you put things?

here are some good videos for learning and explaining proportions : )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eiKcI49l5uc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K4nTEgET9DA
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luJh1ASyzB8
http://ctrlpaint.com/videos/principles-o...proportion

And also Andrew Loomis has a book thats up as a pdf online called "how to draw heads and hands"
here
http://illustrationage.files.wordpress.c...-hands.pdf
hope it helps : )

good luck

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I don't want to come on too strong with the critiquing since all of this might be new to you, I absolutely do not want you to stop drawing or get discouraged by what I say here, I want you too improve! and thats why I tell you these things.

I remember getting critiqued for the first time and I got really upset because iw asn't used to it, but I learned from it and got better : ) and I understand now how important that is. And I hope I don't make you upset by redlining your drawing. That really isn't my goal at all.