Bookend's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

I would challenge you to start the picture over, keeping the same idea, but finding a better angle and pose for your character. Like there's no depth in the picture other than the obvious path along the center of the image. Try downloading DAZ3D studio and play around with it, you can find a good angle and trace over it then.

https://www.daz3d.com/home

It's free, but if you can't do it, just try and find a better pose, and some good overlaps in there. Right now, it's basically a silhouette in profile, and you couldn't draw and 3D shapes on top of it to show the form. Build it up with basic shapes... Hope that helps