03-17-2017, 11:12 AM
oh yea, love that chiaroscuro you got going, haha. lot of good overlaps going on here. The dragon looks really sweet, but the figure I'm not so sure about. If you were about to fight a dragon, would you really stand like that? with one knee bent? That dagger looks like it ain't gonna hurt him, maybe he's summoning the dragon? I can't tell it looks like a kinda awkward pose, not really understanding the narrative.
One piece of advice I have for you is something I heard say I think Will Terrell. He said the best way to improve your creative output is just to create more. When you're detailing and painting all this stuff, yea you're getting better at rendering but you're not creating new stuff you know. See, then you do this comp and it looks twice as good, it'd be even better if you did like the same lighting setup but from the idea of the dramatic camera angle you had with the last one. Cuz right now it's your standard horizon line for the comp, which man, if you could do this setup with that dragon that sense of form and that lighting, with a better camera angle and figure pose, you'd a folio piece, even if it's greyscale (which i know you wanna do color.)
Hurry and update!! I'm interested!
One piece of advice I have for you is something I heard say I think Will Terrell. He said the best way to improve your creative output is just to create more. When you're detailing and painting all this stuff, yea you're getting better at rendering but you're not creating new stuff you know. See, then you do this comp and it looks twice as good, it'd be even better if you did like the same lighting setup but from the idea of the dramatic camera angle you had with the last one. Cuz right now it's your standard horizon line for the comp, which man, if you could do this setup with that dragon that sense of form and that lighting, with a better camera angle and figure pose, you'd a folio piece, even if it's greyscale (which i know you wanna do color.)
Hurry and update!! I'm interested!
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]