07-07-2017, 08:07 AM
Hey, cool stuff here! Looks like you've been busy grinding the past few weeks. I have a few crits for the character designs, though. The boss that you have as the possible final boss doesn't scream "big bad" to me. In fact, I'd say he's the least unique character of your lineup, which could be interesting if you're aiming for him hiding in plain sight, but I think it's not very strong from a design point of view. I'd recommend having the final boss being the one with the most interesting, unique silhouette.
Also, as cool as all the designs are, they don't look much like a 2d platformer. Instead, they seem to fit more in an animated show or a movie. If you want it to be more like a video game, I'd recommend making fake screenshots, taking in consideration how the game would play. Could you maybe try pixel art? Or making dialogue bubbles like in here:
![[Image: fire_emblem_awakening_50.jpg]](https://s.candybanana.com/images/61ea/fire_emblem_awakening_50.jpg)
Keep it up, and good luck!
Also, as cool as all the designs are, they don't look much like a 2d platformer. Instead, they seem to fit more in an animated show or a movie. If you want it to be more like a video game, I'd recommend making fake screenshots, taking in consideration how the game would play. Could you maybe try pixel art? Or making dialogue bubbles like in here:
Keep it up, and good luck!