05-07-2019, 11:44 AM
Hey man, really cool studies you've got going on.
Just to build of what Fed said a lil bit - at the moment it feels like she isn't actually holding onto anything. There's not a real sense of gravity to her so it makes it look like she's posing, rather than in the middle of a dangerous activity.
A small nitpick is to watch out for your values - her foot, pants and hand are very similar in value to the rockface that all the information gets lost. It's hard to feel the weight of a pose if we can't see her feet. It's hard to feel like she's holding onto something if we can't see what she's holding onto.
Anyways, just things to think about going forward.
Keep up the good work! :)
Just to build of what Fed said a lil bit - at the moment it feels like she isn't actually holding onto anything. There's not a real sense of gravity to her so it makes it look like she's posing, rather than in the middle of a dangerous activity.
A small nitpick is to watch out for your values - her foot, pants and hand are very similar in value to the rockface that all the information gets lost. It's hard to feel the weight of a pose if we can't see her feet. It's hard to feel like she's holding onto something if we can't see what she's holding onto.
Anyways, just things to think about going forward.
Keep up the good work! :)