05-13-2019, 02:58 AM
@Fedo- Agre totally. The pose looked really stiff and i think still is, yet has some gravity. Tried to push her pose a bit downwards and more grounded on the rock.
Worked a bit on her expression to act a bit more concerned.
Made a quick experiment to convert her to a steampunk climber with some vertical iron beams on the BG but it didn´t work.
Still, i´m not satisfied with the piece and still not finished.
I´m intenting to abandon that piece if the next step does not solve it´s main issues. I´ll give it another shot.
@Chub- I agree and used part of your tip on the current pose. Still not sure if the pose i´ve chosen works.
My main concern is that the pose needs to be harmonious with the vertical composition. The thing that drove me to start the piece was the simple vertical composition yet if the pose does not work, the piece will not work.
That nitpick makes perfect sense, even though all those elements were in shadow they should read indepentently as you´ve said. Thanks!!
Once again, gone to the shelve and i´m re-working more two concepts, those two i need to say, i´m a bit more satisfied with in the current stage.
Tried to apply some lesseon i´ve learned by studying in grayscale concept art by Igor Sid in my provocateur piece. ( yeah, the right shoulder needs to be wider haha)
One the second one, the Kalari warrior i was quite suprised. Initially i didn´t give two cents about the piece but after re-working a bit i´m starting slowly to enjoy it.
Worked a bit on her expression to act a bit more concerned.
Made a quick experiment to convert her to a steampunk climber with some vertical iron beams on the BG but it didn´t work.
Still, i´m not satisfied with the piece and still not finished.
I´m intenting to abandon that piece if the next step does not solve it´s main issues. I´ll give it another shot.
@Chub- I agree and used part of your tip on the current pose. Still not sure if the pose i´ve chosen works.
My main concern is that the pose needs to be harmonious with the vertical composition. The thing that drove me to start the piece was the simple vertical composition yet if the pose does not work, the piece will not work.
That nitpick makes perfect sense, even though all those elements were in shadow they should read indepentently as you´ve said. Thanks!!
Once again, gone to the shelve and i´m re-working more two concepts, those two i need to say, i´m a bit more satisfied with in the current stage.
Tried to apply some lesseon i´ve learned by studying in grayscale concept art by Igor Sid in my provocateur piece. ( yeah, the right shoulder needs to be wider haha)
One the second one, the Kalari warrior i was quite suprised. Initially i didn´t give two cents about the piece but after re-working a bit i´m starting slowly to enjoy it.