Ricardo´s Art Journey

[Fedodika]

alot of these recent ones like the proportions are about right but the poses feel very still, the lines of the legs on the new claw girl, kinda like voldos katars. a great way to check if the pose is stiff is to literally take it yourself, like one leg is tippy toed one is straight on a diagonal which, you know could work its not a bad plan, just something aboutthe rest of the body isnt really going with it.

Like she has really dynamic legs, twisting hold weight radically, but the rest of her is straight up and down and her face is somber. Her hands and arms are goofy, like im imagining the arm on the right side of the image without clothing and its disturbingly long, and you got lazy with the fists and they are both dead on views instead of turning with perspective.

The dude with the gun his face is good, but his stance is strange like idk how his feet are supposed to be on the floor, the foot to the left of the image is higher on the ground plane as if the ground is rising, i did a similar pose and yes theres some goofs in mine,

https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1545139915

But for your guy the torso is straight on, bend it, make sure everything wherever possible is moving in perspective and you arent drawing things flat as if its straight on. his face and hand are rendered nice, but the rest isnt rendered to any light souce kinda like flat cut and paste shapes. cast some shadows, think about how these forms are relating to one another; first thing i find in a drawing are the cast shadows after the gesture, it helps loads