Ricardo´s Art Journey

[Fedodika]

hey ricky, i know this isnt an in depth paintover but you really need to vary your line weight as all of them right now are the same width and it adds this really juvenille appearance to your work. Just adding like a micro cast shadow under a hair strand can add a lot of depth. Also think about lines in shadow, things in shadow will have less definition, so maybe leave off that line. 

You arent making these characters to be animated, so you dont have to strip back the line weight that much for the sake of simplicity; Id reccomend embellishing the details and lines because often when you look at Pokemon or DBZ stuff youre going to see a stripped back style for the sake of making animation simpler.