08-31-2015, 05:54 AM
Hey, nice work so far. Lots of great studies! You're going in the right direction.
Hmm, lower half looks like it might require some shifting-- The hips look too low to me, and the torso too long. I may be mistaken, of course. I mean, you have the measurements right according to the head (looks about 6 heads tall, maybe should be 7), but it looks like you need to bring the lines in the middle for the legs up more, and that arm is looking too short.
All in all, I'd recommend looking at your proportions again, maybe trying to redraw. Andrew Loomis is great in terms of proportion, and you can get a good idea of the correct sizes. (And his books are free!)
Keep working at it!
Hmm, lower half looks like it might require some shifting-- The hips look too low to me, and the torso too long. I may be mistaken, of course. I mean, you have the measurements right according to the head (looks about 6 heads tall, maybe should be 7), but it looks like you need to bring the lines in the middle for the legs up more, and that arm is looking too short.
All in all, I'd recommend looking at your proportions again, maybe trying to redraw. Andrew Loomis is great in terms of proportion, and you can get a good idea of the correct sizes. (And his books are free!)
Keep working at it!
