12-07-2016, 05:44 PM
This is perfect, this is the feedback I'm looking for, thanks a bunch @Amit!
The notan studies I completely agree with you, I tried to depict the objects, to clearly show what they are, that's why the mess, especially with the forests, and that's exactly why I chose them in the first place, because I knew I'll have difficulty in depicting them and I was hoping to get some feedback from you on it about them so this turned out as I wanted haha :D
About the comps, sound advice! But other than that I still feel that something is just missing and I don't know what :D in most of them, including the ship one for example. I'm just having that feeling of "meh", I couldn't get across the seriousness of the problem, maybe I should have included some fleeing people or something to get across the panic. Funny how the only one (the snowy scene) that looks good is the one I started with no idea of what I want to do :)). If you look closely it's the only one that doesn't appear in the notan warm up D:. It probably also helped that I was using the krita perspective assistant which made everything soo much easier, but yeah, I need to work on my perspective drawing skills :) among the million other issues.
Alright, thanks for you very useful feedback! Let's see if I can do any better! :D
The notan studies I completely agree with you, I tried to depict the objects, to clearly show what they are, that's why the mess, especially with the forests, and that's exactly why I chose them in the first place, because I knew I'll have difficulty in depicting them and I was hoping to get some feedback from you on it about them so this turned out as I wanted haha :D
About the comps, sound advice! But other than that I still feel that something is just missing and I don't know what :D in most of them, including the ship one for example. I'm just having that feeling of "meh", I couldn't get across the seriousness of the problem, maybe I should have included some fleeing people or something to get across the panic. Funny how the only one (the snowy scene) that looks good is the one I started with no idea of what I want to do :)). If you look closely it's the only one that doesn't appear in the notan warm up D:. It probably also helped that I was using the krita perspective assistant which made everything soo much easier, but yeah, I need to work on my perspective drawing skills :) among the million other issues.
Alright, thanks for you very useful feedback! Let's see if I can do any better! :D
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