10-19-2015, 08:56 AM
Hey guys, great job on posting and helping each other out. keep that up! I will reserve my crits and help for the video crits. You learn the most from struggling through and making/identifying/solving your own mistakes so just go for it. Again this is just an exercise really, so don't think about them like final pieces. Let yourself make those mistakes and I will point out stuff you can think about to avoid them next time.
@lordminkx: Nice thumb man. Some small comp tweaks could be made perhaps but just crack on with the rest
@keeny: Nice work Barry, lots of time being spent on that! Keep it up.
@Art44: Scale is improving, nice one; but still a way to go. No worries about that though, will maybe suggest something in your crit.
@Olooriel: The guys made some good suggestions. To get more depth, add more overlapping things at various distances, make things much less contrasty in the distance. The more you dial down the contrast the more things will appear distant / shrouded by atmo perspective.
@wasgodx : much improvement already.
I might be streaming sometime later today, not class related specifically but if I do, feel free to drop in and ask questions etc.
@lordminkx: Nice thumb man. Some small comp tweaks could be made perhaps but just crack on with the rest
@keeny: Nice work Barry, lots of time being spent on that! Keep it up.
@Art44: Scale is improving, nice one; but still a way to go. No worries about that though, will maybe suggest something in your crit.
@Olooriel: The guys made some good suggestions. To get more depth, add more overlapping things at various distances, make things much less contrasty in the distance. The more you dial down the contrast the more things will appear distant / shrouded by atmo perspective.
@wasgodx : much improvement already.
I might be streaming sometime later today, not class related specifically but if I do, feel free to drop in and ask questions etc.